I know how hard it is to translate from ones own langage to english, I did the same for my fic, even if I hadn't yet the time to translate more than the prolog xD
You did a good job! XD

I like the beginning, I want to know more, I'm like Riida (and Nino and Jun), I'm worried for Aiba and I wonder who causes him such a pain...
And wasn't Sho's reaction too exagerate? I assume that yelling at him wouldn't arrange things... >.<

Gambatte for translating the others parts! ^__^